I-Johnny's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Someone to Kill For]

Nice, However could have been better.

Maybe instead of not able to decide what to do with the sky, maybe it would better, if you can just get a sample sky, and make your own?

Because the sky's color tone seemed to beat the foreground...

BUt nice arts though

deebznutz responds:

yeah i probably could have done some more hue/saturation changes in the sky or simply came up with something ill be updating soon

[Going for a Dip]

It is nice

Your background is absolutely stunning minus the images of a girls back pointing towards our view, everything is else is cool the water is fine as well,

the other reviewers already pointed out there is something wrong with the proportion of the body mainly going down from the waist, the sense of depth is a little odd somewhere but I cant pinpoint it.

Your coloring is beautiful, better results if you tried to match the skin tone of your characters and the position of your light source, all the best

Sabtastic responds:

lol - Back when I drew this, I didn't notice the crazy nonesensical proportions, but now that I have no intention of fixing it, go figure, everyone points it out and now it drives me nuts!

Light sources are always tough for me -- oddly. I always end up picking a light source lazily half-way through the colouring of the picture.